Ok... so I posted about a month ago on some advice for not wanting presents..but money. We have two kids 9 and 11 and for our honeymoon we are wanting to take them to Disney Land as they havent been their before.
He has been married 2 times prior to me and I haven NEVER been married. We have lived together for 4 years and have everything we need.....Not to mention we live in a 950 sq ft house. Everyone who knows us knows that everything we do, is with our kids, so we didnt think it would be a huge surprise that we would be planning a family trip as our honeymoon. I have seen many ways to tell guests in the invites that you would prefer money..everyhting form coming out and saying it, to opening a bank account. I thought it might be neat to insert a fun poem...so I sat down and wrote one.. PLEASE tell me you girls's honest opinion on what ya think.. most people have like it...but is it tacky??????

We didn't register-
no gift lists to read-
no gravy boats no toasters-
we have all that we need.
we are two families soon to be one-
we are saving our cash for some family fun.
Our honeymoon will happen-
as a family of four-
as we visit california-
and much much more!
So money would be great,fantastic and grand-
to help us take the boys to Disney Land!!